If Edward had never come back!

Δεν ειναι δικο μου,το βρηκα στο internet!!!Ειναι πολυυυυυυυυυυυυυυυυυυ λυπητερο αλλα μου αρεσε!!!Διαβαστε!!!!What if Edward had never come back?? TWILIGHT LOVERS, this is for you.? (All Finished)?
Okay, so i was re-reading New Moon yesterday and i was thinking, what if Bella had waited for Jake at his house, never jumped the cliff, and alice never came back?? Abd I know I know that Edward said later that he wouldve come back anyway, but what if he hadn't?? I hate to think that he wouldn't because I LOVE EDWARD! and i think bella belongs with him.. but what if that hadn't happened?So i wrote an alternate ending last night. Just for fun. I know I'm no Stephenie Meyer, but i don't think its too bad..
~~SideNote::: I'll keeping adding it on, so be patient, it could take a while for me to type out..

13 years later, if Edward had never come back :
With the same old key from under the eave i unlocked the door and stepped inside. After all of these years barely anything had changed. the yellow cabinets were fading, and Charlie had added my wedding picture to his mantle, but beside that, it looked the same as it did the day I moved in here. (hold on i will continue with it)
11 months ago
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I smiled down at the photo, Jacob smiled back up at me, holding my hands at the alter. "Bella?" a voice called from the front door. "In here" i called back. Jake walked to my side, following my gaze to the picture. "hmmm" he hummed happily. i turned away from the picture and looked up at him. "i miss him so much!" i said, thinking about Charlie, who died a week ago. "i know you do." he soothed me, moving his hands to my round belly. He rubbed it gently, knowing this always calmed me down. Just in time, the baby kicked. he smiled and kissed my head. "Im going to go check out the rest of the house. I'll meet you outside." i said in a rush to see my old room. it has been four years since I've been back here in Forks, Washington. Four years since Jacob gave up his life as a wolf, so that we could start a family. i wobbled my way upstairs to my room, just as i left it. i crossed the floor to the small window. it opened easily, but dust flew off of it everywhere. ( more to come:)
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The guys outside looked up at me. There stood Jacob with his two best friends Quil and Embry, whom we havent seen since we left. "Bella!" they called enthusiastically. i turned to run down to them, and show off my baby bump, forgetting how wrong that was for me to do. I tripped over my own feet and fell onto my knees. the old wooden floor gave a large BOOM. "AGH!" i yelled. i heard laughter come from outside as they no doubt pictured me on the floor. "im okay!" i called sarcastically. i shifted my wieght to one side, attempting to get up on my own, but my body sunk lower as one of the floorboards gave out. i pulled my knee out of the hole and settled on my side. breathing hard, (it was like i couldnt do anything these days) i manuevered myself to examine the damage i probably caused. if we were going to sell this place, that would have to be fixed. i heard the guys laughing outside and it irritated me. its only the hormones, i told myself. i shouldnt get so mad. (More on the way..)
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I peered into the hole and i saw the unusual sun gleem off of something. i reached down and pulled out something i had not seen in 13 years. "AHH!" i screamed. "Bella? are you okay?" i heard Jake yell, entering the house. he ran up the stairs and came into the room watching me anxiously. my mouth was hanging open as I held the clear CD case in my hand. He came over to me, kneeling on thefloor. "Bells? What is it?" I couldnt believe my eyes. they must be lying to me. the all too familiar hole ripped open in my chest and i couldnt breathe. i havent felt this burning feeling for so long, but it felt like I'd had it with me forever. like the hole had never closed. i stared down at the silver CD in my hand, unable to move. Frozen. Jake lifted me onto my old, creaky bed. Just because he isnt a wolf anymore, doesnt mean he isnt freakishly strong. i couldnt answer when he asked me what it was. Frusturated, he took it out of my hands and put it in the radio that was still on my bedside table...
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The music came on and the sorrow swallowed me hole. i collapsed on the floor and Jake rushed to my side. I pushed him away, irritated and scrambled my way to the hole. I thrust my hand inside and pulled out the pictures and tickets i knew would be there. I pulled them out slowly, trying to talk myself out of it. Dont do this, you know what will happen. Why do you torture yourself like this bella? i thought angrily. against my better judgement, i pulled them out and layed them out on the wood. I heard Jake's jaw drop when he saw the picture of me and ...him.... in my dad's kitchen, standing awekwardly next to eachother. I couldnt think his name. Or maybe i could, Edward. the hole ripped open further in my chest. I wrapped my arms around my torso and Jacob saw that. Recognizing these signs quickly, he turned off my lullaby. I hadnt noticed that tears had started flowing. Jake sighed angrily and i glared up at him. He rolled his eyes and i turned away, ashamed at myself. (more to come)
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The music came on and the sorrow swallowed me hole. i collapsed on the floor and Jake rushed to my side. I pushed him away, irritated and scrambled my way to the hole. I thrust my hand inside and pulled out the pictures and tickets i knew would be there. I pulled them out slowly, trying to talk myself out of it. Dont do this, you know what will happen. Why do you torture yourself like this bella? i thought angrily. against my better judgement, i pulled them out and layed them out on the wood. I heard Jake's jaw drop when he saw the picture of me and ...him.... in my dad's kitchen, standing awekwardly next to eachother. I couldnt think his name. Or maybe i could, Edward. the hole ripped open further in my chest. I wrapped my arms around my torso and Jacob saw that. Recognizing these signs quickly, he turned off my lullaby. I hadnt noticed that tears had started flowing. Jake sighed angrily and i glared up at him. He rolled his eyes and i turned away, ashamed at myself. (more to come)
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Pulling my from my thoughts, I heard Embry and Quil calling my name so i stuffed my disturbing treasures in the inside pocket of my jacket and walked down stairs. Jacob looked at me expectantly and i nodded once. Stupid Bella, i thought. Jacob came to my side, rubbing my belly.
Later in the car, Jake asked me the question he had been waiting to all day. "Bella? What were those things doing there anyway?" his question puzzled me. I hadnt thought of that, and at that moment, the stuff seemed to burn a hole in my jacket. I tried to remember what he had said that day... it will be as if i had never existed. he promised me that he would never bother me again. well that promise, like so many others he had made me, was broken. "he must have put it there." i said, grinding my teeth together. Jake seemed to like my respnse and relaxed a bit. "Oh.."
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i tried to relax too, because if Jacob knew how i was really feeling right now, how fast my heart was beating, how badly i wanted a differnet hand holding mine, he would have been furious. and if he was going to really quit that life style that was his for so long, he would have to stay calm. Later that night, i put my long forgotten birthday presents away in a box labeled, Charlie's crap, cursing myself internally for what i couldnt seem to control...

[[[this is where it gets really sad ]]]]]

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I woke up with the florida sun beating doewn on my old wrinkled face. i turned, half expecting Jacob to be there beside me. I was disappointed, he was gone. Dead forever. I am now 87 and im all alone in the small house my kids bought for me on the beach. I opened my eyes but suddenly it was dark, my blinds closed. "hello?" i called out scared. i could hear somone breathing, but saw nobody. (more to come)
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Great, i thought. After all i have been through in my life, Im going to be killed by a burglar. "Bella?" a voice breathed from across the room. WHAT?!?! nobody called me Bella anymore. It was always Isabella, or Mrs.Black. But more than that, i knew this voice, better than i shouold. I burst into tears and he was there. Beside my bed, kneeling next to me. through my tears i could see his perfectly sculpted face. his burning gold eyes so close to me. "Bella love, don't cry." but i couldnt stop sobbing. my face burned red and he put his hand to my forehead. I squealed and jumped, the cold suprising me. he looked down, his face sad with long regret. i gasped as i accepted that this was not one of the many dreams that i had about Edward Cullen. the picture i had taped above my head did him no justice. he was looking just as he did 70 years ago. "Edward?" i managed to cry between sobs. "its me bella. im here." he said, obviously shocked by how hoarse me voice was now with the old age.....
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I blushed again, wishing i could look half as good, or young as he did, forever 17. he hummed my lullaby softly, making me cry harder. "bella, i love you. ive never stopped and i never will. im so so sorry." he whispered in my ear.he softly and hesitantly cbrushed the tears from my wrinkled cheek. "I will always love you." he repeated. i grabbed his other hand with as much force as i could manage. i was sick, very sick. and the look on his face told me he knew it. I was dying, with my one true love by my side. Edwarad looked up and pulled the picture of the two of us in Charlies kitchen off of my wall. I could easily tell that anger flooded through him. "Bella? you found it?" "Of course i did. i never stopped loving you Edward. I never will."
" i lied bella. i lied to save you."
"I know that now."
we sat there a long time in the darkness. he never left my side. he told me what he had been doing while i lived my life. " i had to make sure he took care of you." he admitted. ...
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"i never stopped thinking sbout you.." he went on. soon i had to state the obvious. "edward?" "yes?" "im dying, you know that."
"Y-Yes.. i know that. dont worry, we'll be together again." he promised me. and i didnt fight wtih him, although i knew i should. the offer was too good to refuse.

Lying there in my bed, with my one true love's arms wrapped around me like when i was seventeen, Edward hummed me my lullaby until i fell into the one deep sleep that i wouldnt ever wake up from. the last thing i saw was his godlike face, and the last thing i heard was, "Sleep now my love. I'll see you on the other side." and i closed my eyes, welcoming death.





[[[[AGH! it makes me cry, even though i know i just made it all up. Sorry if it totally sucks.. whew that took a while.]]]]]

So, what did you think? and what do you think would happen if Edward had never some back??? I'd love to hear your theories!
11 months ago

Thank you for your nice comments! I'm glad that I'm not the only baby when it comes to this stuff. I was writing this on my bed and my dad comes in (im only 14 btw) and he was all, "why are you crying?" and i was like, "Because BELLA DIED!" and he got all freaked out until i calmed down enough to explain that Bella was only fictional. lol
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ειναι απεριγπαπτο................................τοσο συγκινιτικο..............
και οντως καπως ετσι θα ηταν τα πραγματα,αν δεν αυτοκτονουσε η μπελλα,η δεν την εκλεβε ο Εντουαρτ....................

με στεναχωρησε παρα πολυ.......ειναι τοσο λυπητερο..................(το τελος μου θυμιζει τον ψαλιδοχερη)....

τοπωπω............... σκεφτομαι και θελω να δακρυσω.......τοσο συγκινητικο.......
αχχχχχχχχου..................

Αχου... Τόσο συγκινητικό....!!!

Μου άρεσε τόσο πολύ...!!! :wolfcryout:

Λοιπόν, ήταν πολύ ωραίο αλλά του έλειπε κάτι στο τέλος!!!! Θα ήθελα πολύ να τελειώνει ως εξής:

Σπόιλερ:

μ αρεσει παρα πολυ αυτο το τελος..........................................
την ωρα που διαβαζα το αρχικο εκει που πεθανε ελεγα και μετα ξυπνησε και ειδε οτι ηταν ενα ονειρο.............
μπραβο που το τελιωσες ετσι ιζαμπελλα!!!!!!!!

Isabella21 έγραψε:

Λοιπόν, ήταν πολύ ωραίο αλλά του έλειπε κάτι στο τέλος!!!! Θα ήθελα πολύ να τελειώνει ως εξής:

Σπόιλερ:

αν τελειωνε με αυτο τον τροπο θα ηταν πραγματικα τελειο!το κειμενο ηταν πολυ συγκινητικο,με μελανχολησε και το δικο σου τελος ειναι αυτο που χρειαζομουν.ετσι εξαλλου θα επρεπε να τελειωνει γιατι δεν ειναι δυνατον με κανεναν τροπο αυτοι οι δυο να ειναι χωρια. μπραβο σου!

Ναι,Isabella21!Αυτο το τελος ειναι τελειο!Αλλα το πρωτο τελος ειναι πιο δραματικο και πιο πρωτοτυπο!Πιστευω παντως πως το τελειωνει λιγο αποτομα.Κι αλλωστε,υποτιθεται πως ο Εντουαρντ δεν πιστευει οτι υπαρχει ζωη μετα το θανατο για αυτον,ετσι?

Γιατι να είναι στα αγγλικα ........δεν μπορω να τα καταλάβω ολα !!!

Συγγνωμη αλλα δεν μπορουσα να το μεταφρασω ολο αυτο!!

Μόλις τελειωσω με το MS αν θελετε μπορω να μεταφρασω και κάποια fanfictions!

Thanx a lot!Δεν προλαβαινω καθολου,sorry!!!!(αληθεια,πως σας φαινονται??)

αχ Νασια μου σε λατρευω!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nasiatheslayer έγραψε:

Μόλις τελειωσω με το MS αν θελετε μπορω να μεταφρασω και κάποια fanfictions!

Em.... Αλήθεια ήθελα να ρωτήσω....πόσα καιφάλεα εχεις απο το ΜS????
Και στην πραγματικότιτα....το κείμενο ήταν φανταστικό...αλλά μου άρεσε το δεύτερο τέλος ποιό πολύ....το προτότιπο είναι πολύ μελανχολικό....!!

Isabella21 έγραψε:

Λοιπόν, ήταν πολύ ωραίο αλλά του έλειπε κάτι στο τέλος!!!! Θα ήθελα πολύ να τελειώνει ως εξής:

Σπόιλερ:

Αυτο το τελος ειναι καλυτερο πιστευω... Μπραβο Isabella... Δεν λεω οτι το πρωτοτυπο δεν ειναι καλο απλος εριξα πολυ κλαμα... Ειδικα στο τελος... Τι συγκινητικο...

Εγω δεν καταλαβα ακριβως τι λεει αλλα το τελος το καταλαβα...
και εγω προτιμω της Isabella το τελος...

κορίτσια αν υπάρχει μετάφραση ενημερώστε με.

ωχ τι παθαμε βραδιατικα...!!πολυ κλαμα...!!κι εμενα το αλλο το τελος μου αρεσε ποιο πολυ... της Isabellas...!! απαπα κλαμα βραδιατικα...!! καλε σεις δεν μπορω να σταματησω...!!

ηταν τελειο!!!!!!!!!

Παιδιά,όντως ήταν τέλειο!!!Και πολύ συγκινιτικό!!!Αλλά όντως...το τέλος της Izabella21
Μου αρέσει περισσότερο...

τελειο...Και εγω το τέλος της Izabella21 προτιμω...

και μονο που το σκεφτομαι παιδια τρελενομαι, και μονο που το σκεφτομαι! ανατριχιαζω!

πολύ συγκινητικό και πολύ ωραίο!!!

πο πο..με έκανε να κλάψω τοσο πολύ!!!
παντως φανταζεστε να τελείωνε καπως ετσι???
και στον κινηματογράφο ολοι να κλαινεεε πο πο..!!
αλλα το τέλος της Ιζαμπελας με χαλάρωσε λίγο..
καλα ειναι απλά απιστευτα ολα αυτα που γραφουν μερικοί!!!...

Φανταστειτε εγω που ειμαι "αναισθητη" και δεν συγκινουμε ευκολα (στην ελληνικη μεταφραση του new moon δεν εκλαψα καθολου) εδω συγκηνιθηκα πολυ.....

Αν υπηρχαν τετοιες σκηνες σε ταινια θα πλαντάζαμε στο κλάμα!!!


Το τελος της Isabella21 δεν ξερω ηταν ωραιο και φυσικα ειμαι και θα επρεπε να το προτιμω αλλα νομιζω οτι μου αρεσει πιο πολυ το προτοτυπο της κοπελιας......